III. Translation Revision（20 points，2 points for each）转自:考试网 - [Examw.Com]

A. Directions: Each of the following translated sentences is inadequate. Revise the given versions.

Example:

原文：Adelaide enjoys a Mediterranean climate.

译文：阿德莱德享有地中海气候。

改译：阿德莱德属地中海气候。

36.原文：I was like that ship before my education began.

 译文：在我的教育开始前，就像那样一条船。

37. 原文： “Don’t order me about like that, John Durbeyfield.”

 译文：“别像那样在周围命令我，约翰·德贝菲尔。”

38. 原文：N and S Adelaide are divided by the Torrens River, spanned by four bridges and lined with ornamental gardens.

译文：阿德莱德南北两区被托伦斯河分割，河上有四座桥梁，两岸点缀着许多花园。

39. 原文：When the crude oil is obtained from the field, it is taken to the refineries to be treated.

译文：油田打出原油以后，便送到炼油厂去对待。

40. 原文：Belts of parklands line three sides of the area and four large open squares of lawns and trees break the regularity of the city buildings.

译文：三面有公园环绕，区内四大广场有草坪和树木，打破了市区建筑的单调。

B. Directions: Each of the following translated sentences is inadequate. Revise the given versions.

Example:

原文：中国在任何情况之下决不首先使用核武器。

译文：At no time China will be the first to use nuclear weapons.

改译：At no time will China be the first to use nuclear weapons.

41. 原文：我说，唯其不是文学家，我就不受文学规律的限制，我也不怕别人把我赶出文学界。

译文：I replied, “As long as I’m not man of letters, I’m not subjected to any of the rules of literature. Nor do I have to be afraid of being thrown out of any literary circles.”

42. 原文：全面规划，加强领导，这就是我们的方针。

译文：Comprehensive planning and more effective leadership, this is our policy.

43. 原文：他在中国国内旅游过的地方，除了井冈山以外，都是我没有到过的。

译文： In China, he has traveled many places where I have never visited, with the exception of Jinggang Mountains.

44. 原文： 鼓励合营企业向中国境外销售产品。

译文： To encourage an equity joint venture to market its products outside China.

45. 原文：……可我从头到脚淋成了落汤鸡了。

译文：…I was drenched from head to foot like a drowned cat.